Improved Animatic.

Here is my improved animatic.



To improve my animatic I re-did some parts of my blog to adjust to the feedback that I received. The adjustments that I have made are:
-I have removed the speech bubbles were I have speech as it looked more like a comic strip with the speech bubbles on.
-I removed the zooms in and outs.
-I also added sound effects of a phone ringing and a door slamming to make it more obvious what is going on.